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Thursday, 21 November 2019

man on the moon from Geneva

Man on the moon 
One  day my mum and dad went  on a date and left my, big brother to look 

after me. All my big brother, does is play video-games. I had nothing to do so I decided, to look at the moon through my telescope.  I zoomed in on the moon and you will never believe , what I saw. I saw a little house all of a sudden, a man walked out of the house. I was wondering how he  survived on the moon? He seemed ,to be my himself. He looked sad and was looking at the. ground.

It was now christmas. For christmas mum gave me another ,telescope then I remembered the lonely man on the moon he did not get any Christmas presents, because it looked like there was no one else on the moon. I decided

 to give him ,my telescope. Andy looked at me. 

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