kia ora
Elizabeth Swann
From the pirates of the carribean because she was looking for gold. She got there on the boat,
the flying Dutchman. and was dropped off by will. She is a Flying Dutchman.
the flying Dutchman. and was dropped off by will. She is a Flying Dutchman.
She has blonde hair. wearing boots and a Dress. She has a Spade to Digger a hole for gold.
She finds a mep. She finds the island. She dings for gold. A storm comes and she finds shelter.
Then the next day a prince found something in it. He found gold then he went to go look for shelter.
There's a girl in the shelter.
There's a girl in the shelter.
“wake up girl”
“oh no hello man what are you doing here”
“i came here to look for .gold”
“ME TOO man what in your hand”
“GOLD”
“GOLD .where did you Get it .from”
they sailed away back .home and her grandma passed away when she was
trapped on an island THE END.
What a great story Geneva.Your description of the girl,gave me a great picture in mind head as to how she looks.I like that you have the words in brackets,on separate lines.Maybe just put one space between the lines next time.
ReplyDeleteWhat did they do with the gold when they got back home?.