Kia ora this is my Language Feature
term free
help help help running away from Isla she threw an axe at me
l running and running from Isla l was so so scared, but then
she stopped running and l stopped running too she had a bomb
and she said “ha ha ha ha i'm going to kill you ha ha ha BOOM,
but it didn't hit me at hip Isla she's gone and then i ran back
to the shed and bread the axe and then isla Kang black,
blood dripping down and down she came closer and closer
with some bombs in here Hans she said sorry but we're gonna
die together hahaha, 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 BOOM the end...
Thank's for reading my blog
Hello Geneva
ReplyDeleteI like the hyperbole that you used about the mother moose being a superhero! I have watched the video and she did rush over because her baby was scared to cross the road. You have made a good start in your work. Perhaps when you have finished it you could share it with us?
Tash